Nevernight by Jay Kristoff
In a world of three suns where only true darkness happens every two years, a young girl – a child of a failed rebellion – makes her first kill in order to join the fabled Red Church – an assassin school. Once she gets to the school, she trains to become a member of the church. Mia, the girl, also possesses a mysterious companion – a non-cat shadow that allows her to use the power of the Dark. She has three reasons to succeed – three deaths responsible for her father’s hanging. Along the way a plot of capture the leaders of the Red Church unfolds and only Mia can stop it.
Let’s start with the beginning – it is f*cking brilliant! The first chapter starts as a flashback, but really only a short time before the actual start of the chapter. Let’s just say that I have never read a better first chapter. The bottom line, for Mia to join the Red Church, she has to kill someone. Now, normally, this might be trite, but the way Mr. Kristoff does it is ingenious. The flashback is how Mia decides to lose her virginity because she doesn’t know if she will live the attempted murder. The poetic way in which the sexual scene plays out is the exact same wording as when she murders the hangman of her father. Like literally the exact same pacing & sentence structure (with very few word changes) to invoke a complete different meaning. The reader knows what is happening, but to see it written to mean two different things is amazing. It was such an awesome opening that I don’t know how a better one can start.
– She drew a breath, perhaps to speak (but what would she say?) and then there was pain, pain, O, Daughters it hurt. He was inside her – it was inside her – so hard and real she couldn’t help but cry out, biting her lip to muffle the flood.
– He drew a sucking breathing, perhaps to speak (but what could he say?) and she could see it in his eyes – pain, pain, O, Daughters, it hurt. It was inside him – she was inside him – stabbing hard as he tried to cry out, her hand over his mouth to muffle the flood.
Mia Corvere is such a great protagonist. She is not the best at everything, not big, not strong. But she is clever, smart, witty, hilarious, stubborn and downright fun. Normally I don’t like school/training novels, but Mia made it all worthwhile. She really was a great character to follow. Her interaction with the non-cat shadow (named Mister Kindly no less!) was such good banter, and her relationship with Tric was fun too. Best part about Mia is that she doesn’t let the story come to her, she actively plots the course of the story, even in the school setting.
I really loved the world. It has basis in ancient Rome – which is my personal favorite. I love all the background information and worldbuilding Mr. Kristoff does. It is just a really cool world. I also liked the minimal magic systems within it. Yes, Mia has a power, and there are two other cool magic systems, but none of these take the front of the plot. They are really only good additions to the story.
In case you didn’t get it above, I love the vivid wording and age level of this story. Sure most of the characters are teenagers, this world is as dark and gritty as they come. The writing is realistic and doesn’t hold back. Everything is written with great detail. I mean, there are two sex scenes after the first chapter and boy oh boy were they detailed. Dude could seriously write some graphic scenes. But that isn’t just with the sex, but also the violence and the dialogue. Assassins are not roses and gumdrops so I am extremely happy with how dark it all is. One other thing to note on the writing, there are tons upon tons of metaphors and turns of phrase. I can see how some might not like it, but I sure do.
What doesn’t work:
The footnotes. At first, I really enjoyed the footnotes. The narrator was quirky and witty. But then they just basically became info dumps and I ended up skipping them altogether.
For the most part, this story was 3rd person limited POV (nearly all from Mia’s), but there were times when it went into 3rd person omniscient. I hate that when the author bleeds into other characters’ heads without warning then back to another. It gets confusing at times and I’m just not a fan.
This is minor, but I didn’t like how quickly the end plot point was figured out. There weren’t enough hints leading up to it that it kinda felt somewhat “meh” when the conclusion was determined. Almost unearned. Also, the one death that happened at the end was way too undervalued. I just wasn’t a fan how it went down.
4 out of 5. I really liked this book overall and think it has the makings of a great trilogy. Excited to get the next installment